From a6e1d7b5fb2ac117acd83aa690767410521cb46b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Simon Riggs <simon@2ndQuadrant.com>
Date: Fri, 1 Jun 2012 11:33:16 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] Copy editing of release notes for couple of my items.

---
 doc/src/sgml/release-9.2.sgml | 15 +++++++--------
 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)

diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/release-9.2.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/release-9.2.sgml
index e4152e7397..a842d448e9 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/release-9.2.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/release-9.2.sgml
@@ -461,13 +461,6 @@
        </para>
       </listitem>
 
-      <listitem>
-       <para>
-        Improve performance of transactions using many savepoints (Simon
-        Riggs)  PARTIALLY REVERTED.  KEEP?
-       </para>
-      </listitem>
-
       <listitem>
        <para>
         Improve <command>COPY</command> performance by adding tuples to
@@ -549,7 +542,13 @@
 
       <listitem>
        <para>
-        Improve locking performance during group commit (Peter Geoghegan)
+        Allow group commit to work effectively under heavy load (Peter
+        Geoghegan, Simon Riggs)
+       </para>
+
+       <para>
+        Previously, batching of commits became ineffective as the write
+        workload increased because of internal lock contention.
        </para>
       </listitem>
 
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2.40.0