From 9c4f20066fb20197dfc20e3cf31aa3c890f3646b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Peter Eisentraut <peter@eisentraut.org>
Date: Thu, 19 Sep 2019 11:46:40 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] doc: Improve a release notes item

---
 doc/src/sgml/release-12.sgml | 7 ++++---
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/release-12.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/release-12.sgml
index c1985d6822..38c45967fc 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/release-12.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/release-12.sgml
@@ -2360,12 +2360,13 @@ Author: Peter Eisentraut <peter@eisentraut.org>
 -->
 
       <para>
-       Add support for <acronym>ICU</acronym> collation attributes
-       (Peter Eisentraut)
+       Add support for <acronym>ICU</acronym> collation attributes on older
+       ICU versions (Peter Eisentraut)
       </para>
 
       <para>
-       This allows customization of the collation rules.
+       This allows customization of the collation rules in a consistent way
+       across all ICU versions.
       </para>
      </listitem>
 
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2.40.0