From 15ad161345d8c26304cd98e24922657faf9038f1 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: cohrs Date: Sat, 17 May 2003 21:35:21 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] more grammar bits Reported to the list a while back by . The Knight's quest messages are inconsistent in the use of royal pronouns. Capitalize them all. Another option would have been to remove all royal capitalization (since such Capitalization didn't come into use until relatively recently). --- dat/quest.txt | 16 ++++++++-------- 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-) diff --git a/dat/quest.txt b/dat/quest.txt index 73c6c05d2..478c3c0fe 100644 --- a/dat/quest.txt +++ b/dat/quest.txt @@ -1128,7 +1128,7 @@ near %i?" "Hast thou indeed recovered %o?" %E %Cc Kni 00015 -"Ah, %p. We see thou hast received our summons. +"Ah, %p. We see thou hast received Our summons. We are in dire need of thy prowess. But first, We must needs decide if thou art ready for this great undertaking." %E @@ -1142,7 +1142,7 @@ decide if thou art ready for this great undertaking." "Thou disgracest this noble court with thine impure presence. We have been lenient with thee, but no more. Thy name shall be spoken no more. We hereby strip thee of thy title, thy lands, and thy standing as %ca. -Begone from our sight!" +Begone from Our sight!" %E %Cc Kni 00019 "Verily, %p, thou hast done well. That thou hast survived thus @@ -1155,7 +1155,7 @@ Our presence when thou hast attained the noble title of %R." %E %Cc Kni 00020 "Thou dishonourest us, %p! Thou hast strayed from the path of -chivalry! Go from our presence and do penance. Only when thou art again +chivalry! Go from Our presence and do penance. Only when thou art again pure mayst thou return hence." %E %Cc Kni 00021 @@ -1164,8 +1164,8 @@ been. Hear now Our words: "As thou noticed as thou approached %H, a great battle hath been fought recently in these fields. Know thou that Merlin himself -came to aid us here as we battled the foul %n. In the midst of that -battle, %n struck Merlin a great blow, felling him. Then, as our +came to aid us here as We battled the foul %n. In the midst of that +battle, %n struck Merlin a great blow, felling him. Then, as Our forces were pressed back, %n stole %o. "We eventually turned the tide, but lost many %cP in doing so. @@ -1184,7 +1184,7 @@ We restore Merlin to health." "Remember, %p, follow always the path of %d." %E %Cp Kni 00026 -"Though %n is verily a mighty foe, we have confidence in thy victory." +"Though %n is verily a mighty foe, We have confidence in thy victory." %E %Cp Kni 00027 "Beware, for %n hath surrounded himself with hordes of foul creatures." @@ -1300,7 +1300,7 @@ As you approach %l, he beams at you and says: He hath instructed us that thou art now to be the guardian of %o. He feeleth that thou mayst have need of - its powers in thine adventures. It is our wish that thou keepest + its powers in thine adventures. It is Our wish that thou keepest %o with thee as thou searchest for the fabled Amulet of Yendor. %E @@ -1315,7 +1315,7 @@ return through the magic portal that brought thee here." "Well met, %p. How goeth thy search for the Amulet of Yendor?" %E %Cc Kni 00091 -"Thou hast succeeded, we see, %p! Now thou art commanded to take +"Thou hast succeeded, We see, %p! Now thou art commanded to take the Amulet to be sacrificed to %d in the plane of the astral. "Merlin hath counseled us that thou must travel always upwards through -- 2.49.0