From: Joe Orton <jorton@apache.org>
Date: Mon, 24 May 2010 08:33:02 +0000 (+0000)
Subject: - wording tweaks for PeerExtList()
X-Git-Tag: 2.3.6~92
X-Git-Url: https://granicus.if.org/sourcecode?a=commitdiff_plain;h=c3d1f4ba0eac588e7c88dc418a4b4f0959619295;p=apache

- wording tweaks for PeerExtList()


git-svn-id: https://svn.apache.org/repos/asf/httpd/httpd/trunk@947561 13f79535-47bb-0310-9956-ffa450edef68
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diff --git a/docs/manual/mod/mod_ssl.html.en b/docs/manual/mod/mod_ssl.html.en
index e513b252b4..1405b8ed8f 100644
--- a/docs/manual/mod/mod_ssl.html.en
+++ b/docs/manual/mod/mod_ssl.html.en
@@ -1603,7 +1603,7 @@ immediately executed for every request.</p>
 
 <p>The <code>PeerExtList(<em>object-ID</em>)</code> function expects
 to find zero or more instances of the X.509 certificate extension
-identified by the given <em>object ID</em> in the client certificate.
+identified by the given <em>object ID</em> (OID) in the client certificate.
 The expression evaluates to true if the left-hand side string matches
 exactly against the value of an extension identified with this OID.
 (If multiple extensions with the same OID are present, at least one
@@ -1617,14 +1617,14 @@ SSLRequire "foobar" in PeerExtList("1.2.3.4.5.6")
 
 <ul>
 
-<li><p>The string used for the object-ID can be either be a descriptive
-name as recognized by the SSL library, such as <code>"nsComment"</code>,
-or a numeric OID, such as <code>"1.2.3.4.5.6"</code>.</p></li>
+<li><p>The object ID can be specified either as a descriptive
+name recognized by the SSL library, such as <code>"nsComment"</code>,
+or as a numeric OID, such as <code>"1.2.3.4.5.6"</code>.</p></li>
 
 <li><p>Expressions with types known to the SSL library are rendered to
 a string before comparison.  For an extension with a type not
 recognized by the SSL library, mod_ssl will parse the value if it is
-one of the primitive ASN.1 type UTF8String, IA5String, VisibleString,
+one of the primitive ASN.1 types UTF8String, IA5String, VisibleString,
 or BMPString.  For an extension of one of these types, the string
 value will be converted to UTF-8 if necessary, then compared against
 the left-hand-side expression.</p></li>
diff --git a/docs/manual/mod/mod_ssl.xml b/docs/manual/mod/mod_ssl.xml
index a82260f57c..d7b356d7f2 100644
--- a/docs/manual/mod/mod_ssl.xml
+++ b/docs/manual/mod/mod_ssl.xml
@@ -1263,7 +1263,7 @@ immediately executed for every request.</p>
 
 <p>The <code>PeerExtList(<em>object-ID</em>)</code> function expects
 to find zero or more instances of the X.509 certificate extension
-identified by the given <em>object ID</em> in the client certificate.
+identified by the given <em>object ID</em> (OID) in the client certificate.
 The expression evaluates to true if the left-hand side string matches
 exactly against the value of an extension identified with this OID.
 (If multiple extensions with the same OID are present, at least one
@@ -1277,14 +1277,14 @@ SSLRequire "foobar" in PeerExtList("1.2.3.4.5.6")
 
 <ul>
 
-<li><p>The string used for the object-ID can be either be a descriptive
-name as recognized by the SSL library, such as <code>"nsComment"</code>,
-or a numeric OID, such as <code>"1.2.3.4.5.6"</code>.</p></li>
+<li><p>The object ID can be specified either as a descriptive
+name recognized by the SSL library, such as <code>"nsComment"</code>,
+or as a numeric OID, such as <code>"1.2.3.4.5.6"</code>.</p></li>
 
 <li><p>Expressions with types known to the SSL library are rendered to
 a string before comparison.  For an extension with a type not
 recognized by the SSL library, mod_ssl will parse the value if it is
-one of the primitive ASN.1 type UTF8String, IA5String, VisibleString,
+one of the primitive ASN.1 types UTF8String, IA5String, VisibleString,
 or BMPString.  For an extension of one of these types, the string
 value will be converted to UTF-8 if necessary, then compared against
 the left-hand-side expression.</p></li>