From: nhmall <mjnh@persona.ca>
Date: Mon, 14 Dec 2015 02:45:08 +0000 (-0500)
Subject: slightly change quickmimic() sense wording
X-Git-Tag: NetHack-3.6.1_RC01~1179
X-Git-Url: https://granicus.if.org/sourcecode?a=commitdiff_plain;h=6f6f74e8d2207a1f6f8b99abbc67368545da3470;p=nethack

slightly change quickmimic() sense wording

 Changes to be committed:
	modified:   doc/fixes36.1
	modified:   src/dogmove.c

A bug reporter wrote:
> comments:
> "You sense a little dog appear where Poes was!"
>
> seems strange to me, perhaps it should be "appearing", or the hero shouldn't
> notice at all if it's out of sight.
>
> Not sure it was out of sight, anyway, because I saw the d from the shop
> doorway.
>

Change the wording to:
"You sense that a little dog has appeared where Poes was!"
---

diff --git a/doc/fixes36.1 b/doc/fixes36.1
index e9d8a81bf..d68a7abf2 100644
--- a/doc/fixes36.1
+++ b/doc/fixes36.1
@@ -26,6 +26,7 @@ wrong message given when high priest on astral plane rejects being assigned a
 	name (got the one for unique monsters instead of the one for priests)
 negative intrinsic protection shouldn't confer MC=1, "you are warded" (not
 	possible from divine protection but is possible from eating rings)
+make a slight adjustment to the quickmimic() sense wording
 
 
 Platform- and/or Interface-Specific Fixes
diff --git a/src/dogmove.c b/src/dogmove.c
index 36e6c4a41..472e3e416 100644
--- a/src/dogmove.c
+++ b/src/dogmove.c
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-/* NetHack 3.6	dogmove.c	$NHDT-Date: 1446604109 2015/11/04 02:28:29 $  $NHDT-Branch: master $:$NHDT-Revision: 1.56 $ */
+/* NetHack 3.6	dogmove.c	$NHDT-Date: 1450061092 2015/12/14 02:44:52 $  $NHDT-Branch: NetHack-3.6.0 $:$NHDT-Revision: 1.57 $ */
 /* Copyright (c) Stichting Mathematisch Centrum, Amsterdam, 1985. */
 /* NetHack may be freely redistributed.  See license for details. */
 
@@ -1094,8 +1094,8 @@ struct monst *mtmp;
            (on the other hand, perhaps you're sensing a brief glimpse
            of its mind as it changes form) */
         newsym(mtmp->mx, mtmp->my);
-        You("%s %s appear where %s was!",
-            cansee(mtmp->mx, mtmp->my) ? "see" : "sense",
+        You("%s %s %sappear%s where %s was!",
+            cansee(mtmp->mx, mtmp->my) ? "see" : "sense that",
             (mtmp->m_ap_type == M_AP_FURNITURE)
                 ? an(defsyms[mtmp->mappearance].explanation)
                 : (mtmp->m_ap_type == M_AP_OBJECT
@@ -1107,6 +1107,8 @@ struct monst *mtmp;
                             : (mtmp->m_ap_type == M_AP_MONSTER)
                                   ? an(mons[mtmp->mappearance].mname)
                                   : something,
+            cansee(mtmp->mx, mtmp->my) ? "" : "has ",
+            cansee(mtmp->mx, mtmp->my) ? "" : "ed",
             buf);
         display_nhwindow(WIN_MAP, TRUE);
     }