From: Andy Parkins <andyparkins@gmail.com>
Date: Tue, 12 Jun 2007 15:43:19 +0000 (+0100)
Subject: user-manual: grammar and style fixes
X-Git-Tag: v1.5.2.4~7
X-Git-Url: https://granicus.if.org/sourcecode?a=commitdiff_plain;h=5478285961996560147e2fd39daf45b79f580641;p=git

user-manual: grammar and style fixes

 - "method of" is vulgar, "method for" is nicer
 - "recovery" becomes "recovering" from Steve Hoelzer's original version
   of this patch
 - "if you want" is nicer as "if you wish"
 - "you may" should be "you can"; "you may" is "you have permission to"
   rather than "you can"'s "it is possible to"

Signed-off-by: Andy Parkins <andyparkins@gmail.com>
Signed-off-by: "J. Bruce Fields" <bfields@citi.umich.edu>
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diff --git a/Documentation/user-manual.txt b/Documentation/user-manual.txt
index 714e6a9942..e9da5911f6 100644
--- a/Documentation/user-manual.txt
+++ b/Documentation/user-manual.txt
@@ -1528,9 +1528,9 @@ dangling tree b24c2473f1fd3d91352a624795be026d64c8841f
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 Dangling objects are not a problem.  At worst they may take up a little
-extra disk space.  They can sometimes provide a last-resort method of
-recovery lost work--see <<dangling-objects>> for details.  However, if
-you want, you may remove them with gitlink:git-prune[1] or the --prune
+extra disk space.  They can sometimes provide a last-resort method for
+recovering lost work--see <<dangling-objects>> for details.  However, if
+you wish, you can remove them with gitlink:git-prune[1] or the --prune
 option to gitlink:git-gc[1]:
 
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