They said he was amazing. The Amazing Maurice, they said. He'd never
meant to be amazing. It just happened.
-He's realized something was odd that day, just after lunch, when he'd
+He'd realized something was odd that day, just after lunch, when he'd
looked into a reflection in a puddle and thought, /that's me/. He'd never
been /aware/ of himself before. Of course it was hard to remember /how/
he'd thought before becoming amazing. It seemed to him that his mind had