fix #H7446 and #H7448 - Guidebook bits

\#H7448 - option 'dark_room' showed incorrect default value.

\#H7446 - persistence of objects section was missing a word in
its second paragraph.

Also, fix up some clumsy wording in the first paragraph of that
same section.

diff --git a/doc/Guidebook.mn b/doc/Guidebook.mn
index 72963a6bb629a3d0b7b6206acc5f09499a0e9c2f..0c971cee4138810c642428e9e21bbf647ce51e1d 100644 (file)
--- a/doc/Guidebook.mn
+++ b/doc/Guidebook.mn
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-.\" $NHDT-Branch: NetHack-3.6.2-beta01 $:$NHDT-Revision: 1.271 $ $NHDT-Date: 1535668900 2018/08/30 22:41:40 $
+.\" $NHDT-Branch: NetHack-3.6.2-beta01 $:$NHDT-Revision: 1.278 $ $NHDT-Date: 1539507753 2018/10/14 09:02:33 $
 .\"
 .\" This is an excerpt from the 'roff' man page from the 'groff' package.
 .\" NetHack's Guidebook.mn currently does *not* adhere to these guidelines.
@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@
 .ds vr "NetHack 3.6
 .ds f0 "\*(vr
 .ds f1
-.ds f2 "September 26, 2018
+.ds f2 "October 14, 2018
 .
 .\" labeled paragraph start (should be part of tmac.n, but I don't want to
 .\" make changes to that file)
@@ -2257,13 +2257,14 @@ you are carrying (shopkeepers aside).
 Persistence of Objects
 .pg
 Normally, if you have seen an object at a particular map location and
-move to another location which can't directly see that object any
+move to another location where you can't directly see that object any
 more, if will continue to be displayed on your map.
 That remains the case even if it is not actually there any more \(em
 perhaps a monster has picked it up or it has rotted away \(em
 until you can see or feel that location again.
 One notable exception is that if the object gets covered by the
-``remembered, unseen monster'' marker and that marker is later removed
+``remembered, unseen monster'' marker.
+When that marker is later removed
 after you've verified that no monster is there, you will forget that
 there was any object there regardless of whether the unseen monster
 actually took the object.
@@ -2274,7 +2275,7 @@ The situation is the same for a pile of objects, except that only the
 top item of the pile is displayed.
 The
 .op hilite_pile
-option can be enabled in order to show an item differently when is
+option can be enabled in order to show an item differently when it is
 the top one of a pile.
 .
 .hn 1
@@ -2663,7 +2664,7 @@ new players if it detects some anticipated mistakes (default on).
 Have user confirm attacks on pets, shopkeepers, and other
 peaceable creatures (default on).  Persistent.
 .lp dark_room
-Show out-of-sight areas of lit rooms (default off).  Persistent.
+Show out-of-sight areas of lit rooms (default on).  Persistent.
 .lp disclose
 Controls what information the program reveals when the game ends.
 Value is a space separated list of prompting/category pairs

diff --git a/doc/Guidebook.tex b/doc/Guidebook.tex
index 98533d09166efd93e7ba833be02fdc67b2495ed6..31de7bbff1feeda77793df25429901c330b91f5d 100644 (file)
--- a/doc/Guidebook.tex
+++ b/doc/Guidebook.tex
@@ -45,7 +45,7 @@
 %.au
 \author{Original version - Eric S. Raymond\\
 (Edited and expanded for 3.6 by Mike Stephenson and others)}
-\date{September 26, 2018}
+\date{October 14, 2018}
 
 \maketitle
 
@@ -2619,13 +2619,14 @@ you are carrying (shopkeepers aside).
 
 %.pg
 Normally, if you have seen an object at a particular map location and
-move to another location which can't directly see that object any
+move to another location where you can't directly see that object any
 more, if will continue to be displayed on your map.
 That remains the case even if it is not actually there any more--
 perhaps a monster has picked it up or it has rotted away--
 until you can see or feel that location again.
 One notable exception is that if the object gets covered by the
-``remembered, unseen monster'' marker and that marker is later removed
+``remembered, unseen monster'' marker.
+When that marker is later removed
 after you've verified that no monster is there, you will forget that
 there was any object there regardless of whether the unseen monster
 actually took the object.
@@ -2637,7 +2638,7 @@ The situation is the same for a pile of objects, except that only the
 top item of the pile is displayed.
 The
 {\it hilite\verb+_+pile\/}
-option can be enabled in order to show an item differently when is
+option can be enabled in order to show an item differently when it is
 the top one of a pile.
 
 %.hn 1
@@ -3109,7 +3110,7 @@ peaceable creatures (default on).  Persistent.
 %.lp
 %.lp
 \item[\ib{dark\verb+_+room}]
-Show out-of-sight areas of lit rooms (default off).  Persistent.
+Show out-of-sight areas of lit rooms (default on).  Persistent.
 \item[\ib{disclose}]
 Controls what information the program reveals when the game ends.
 Value is a space separated list of prompting/category pairs