I find it clearer with the words in that order.

	* man/subgid.5.xml: Reorder words.
	* man/subuid.5.xml: Likewise.

diff --git a/ChangeLog b/ChangeLog
index bbf5df671bc440c95a9b319732de96c3451e1e6c..3da6ce8b3f10de7a9dbcdb32c7592c9eb55849aa 100644 (file)
--- a/ChangeLog
+++ b/ChangeLog
@@ -1,3 +1,8 @@
+2013-08-06  Nicolas François  <nicolas.francois@centraliens.net>
+
+       * man/subgid.5.xml: Reorder words.
+       * man/subuid.5.xml: Likewise.
+
 2013-08-06  Nicolas François  <nicolas.francois@centraliens.net>
 
        * man/subgid.5.xml: Fix typos.

diff --git a/man/subgid.5.xml b/man/subgid.5.xml
index 15a833aa5e8b81223cac6a3b242a790af0605933..5ef238f89be575145f63093e06af47940804a1a5 100644 (file)
--- a/man/subgid.5.xml
+++ b/man/subgid.5.xml
@@ -68,9 +68,9 @@
     </itemizedlist>
 
     <para>
-      This file specifies the group IDs to be that each user may use
-      with the <command>newgidmap</command> command that ordinary users can use to
-      configure gid mapping in a user namespace.
+      This file specifies the group IDs that ordinary users can use, with
+      the <command>newgidmap</command> command, to configure gid mapping
+      in a user namespace.
     </para>
 
     <para>

diff --git a/man/subuid.5.xml b/man/subuid.5.xml
index d3316cae6f6fec3f7ed5ee852d60d1c0945d4531..70fbc752b7a15ddf36a2b79f1c1dadef07a46d10 100644 (file)
--- a/man/subuid.5.xml
+++ b/man/subuid.5.xml
@@ -68,9 +68,9 @@
     </itemizedlist>
 
     <para>
-      This file specifies the user IDs to be that each user may use
-      with the <command>newuidmap</command> command that ordinary users can use to
-      configure uid mapping in a user namespace.
+      This file specifies the user IDs that ordinary users can use, with
+      the <command>newuidmap</command> command, to configure uid mapping
+      in a user namespace.
     </para>
 
     <para>