Guidebook suggestions by <Someone>

- Also, I just noticed that an entire devteam paragraph
was duplicated in the .tex version.

diff --git a/doc/Guidebook.mn b/doc/Guidebook.mn
index 469dde2167b0dd9dfa8f6e385259cafe2938db7c..7d72bf7dcecaca4fe4987f5a0e8d026a6f1cb03d 100644 (file)
--- a/doc/Guidebook.mn
+++ b/doc/Guidebook.mn
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
 .ds vr "NetHack 3.4
 .ds f0 "\*(vr
 .ds f1
-.ds f2 "March 17, 2002
+.ds f2 "March 18, 2002
 .mt
 A Guide to the Mazes of Menace
 (Guidebook for NetHack)
@@ -2345,10 +2345,10 @@ The 3.3 development team, consisting of \fBMichael Allison\fP, \fBKen Arromdee\f
 December 1999 and 3.3.1 in August of 2000.
 .pg
 Version 3.3 offered many firsts. It was the first version to separate race 
-and profession. The Elf class was removed in preference to an Elf Race, 
-and the races of Dwarves, Gnomes, and Orcs made their first appearance in 
-the game alongside the familiar Human race.  Monk and Ranger roles joined 
-Archeologists, Barbarians, Cavemen, Healers, Knights, Priests, Rogues, 
+and profession. The Elf class was removed in preference to an elf race, 
+and the races of dwarves, gnomes, and orcs made their first appearance in 
+the game alongside the familiar human race.  Monk and Ranger roles joined 
+Archeologists, Barbarians, Cavemen, Healers, Knights, Priests, Rogues, Samurai, 
 Tourists, Valkyries and of course, Wizards.  It was also the first version
 to allow you to ride a steed, and was the first version to have a publicly 
 available web-site listing all the bugs that had been discovered.  Despite 
@@ -2362,7 +2362,7 @@ The 3.4 development team initially consisted of
 \fBJanet Walz\fP, and \fBPaul Winner\fP, with \fB Warwick Allison\fP joining 
 just before the release of NetHack 3.4.0 in March 2002.
 .pg
-As with version 3.2, various people contributed to the game as a whole as
+As with version 3.3, various people contributed to the game as a whole as
 well as supporting ports on the different platforms that NetHack runs on:
 .pg
 \fBPat Rankin\fP maintained 3.4 for VMS.

diff --git a/doc/Guidebook.tex b/doc/Guidebook.tex
index 1181232c56335e08d6b2e7e97cdb100e00ed7174..5c459a5db404464b368ba54d360646f3fafe8676 100644 (file)
--- a/doc/Guidebook.tex
+++ b/doc/Guidebook.tex
@@ -39,7 +39,7 @@
 %.au
 \author{Eric S. Raymond\\
 (Extensively edited and expanded for 3.4)}
-\date{March 17, 2002}
+\date{March 18, 2002}
 
 \maketitle
 
@@ -2907,10 +2907,10 @@ December 1999 and 3.3.1 in August of 2000.
 %.pg
 \medskip
 Version 3.3 offered many firsts. It was the first version to separate race 
-and profession. The Elf class was removed in preference to an Elf Race, 
-and the races of Dwarves, Gnomes, and Orcs made their first appearance in 
-the game alongside the familiar Human race.  Monk and Ranger roles joined 
-Archeologists, Barbarians, Cavemen, Healers, Knights, Priests, Rogues, 
+and profession. The Elf class was removed in preference to an elf race, 
+and the races of dwarves, gnomes, and orcs made their first appearance in 
+the game alongside the familiar human race.  Monk and Ranger roles joined 
+Archeologists, Barbarians, Cavemen, Healers, Knights, Priests, Rogues, Samurai, 
 Tourists, Valkyries and of course, Wizards.  It was also the first version
 to allow you to ride a steed, and was the first version to have a publicly 
 available web-site listing all the bugs that had been discovered.  Despite 
@@ -2928,16 +2928,7 @@ just before the release of NetHack 3.4.0 in March 2002.
 
 %.pg
 \medskip
-The 3.4 development team initially consisted of {\it Michael Allison}, {\it Ken Arromdee},
-{\it David Cohrs}, {\it Jessie Collet}, {\it Steve Creps}, {\it Kevin Darcy},
-{\it Timo Hakulinen},
-{\it Kevin Hugo}, {\it Steve Linhart}, {\it Ken Lorber}, {\it Dean Luick}, {\it Pat Rankin},
-{\it Eric Smith}, {\it Mike Stephenson}, {\it Janet Walz}, and {\it Paul Winner}.
-{\it Warwick Allison} joined just before the release of NetHack 3.4.0.
-
-%.pg
-\medskip
-As with version 3.2, various people contributed to the game as a whole as
+As with version 3.3, various people contributed to the game as a whole as
 well as supporting ports on the different platforms that {\it NetHack\/}
 runs on: