As a healthy starting point, remove the Tanenbaum quote.

SSL is bad enough, no need to intimidate folks before they
even set out.
Remove out-dated references to books and authors.

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diff --git a/docs/manual/ssl/ssl_intro.xml b/docs/manual/ssl/ssl_intro.xml
index 9e779cf1eb16e1bfc0f7aff3a2ad63b1b5ee07f1..a12908ddf7436a5fd6993de027a08f23e6b51a24 100644 (file)
--- a/docs/manual/ssl/ssl_intro.xml
+++ b/docs/manual/ssl/ssl_intro.xml
@@ -26,14 +26,6 @@
   <title>SSL/TLS Strong Encryption: An Introduction</title>
 
 <summary>
-<blockquote>
-<p>The nice thing about standards is that there are so many to choose
-from. And if you really don't like all the standards you just have to
-wait another year until the one arises you are looking for.</p>
-
-<p class="cite">-- <cite>A. Tanenbaum</cite>, "Introduction to
-Computer Networks"</p>
-</blockquote>
 
 <p>As an introduction this chapter is aimed at readers who are familiar
 with the Web, HTTP, and Apache, but are not security experts. It is not
@@ -43,20 +35,6 @@ important legal issues of patents and import and export restrictions.
 Rather, it is intended to provide a common background to <module
 >mod_ssl</module> users by pulling together various concepts, definitions,
 and examples as a starting point for further exploration.</p>
-
-<p>The presented content is mainly derived, with the author's permission,
-from the article <a
-href="http://home.comcast.net/~fjhirsch/Papers/wwwj/">Introducing
-SSL and Certificates using SSLeay</a> by <a
-href="http://home.comcast.net/~fjhirsch/">Frederick J. Hirsch</a>, of The
-Open Group Research Institute, which was published in <a
-href="http://www.ora.com/catalog/wjsum97/">Web Security: A Matter of
-Trust</a>, World Wide Web Journal, Volume 2, Issue 3, Summer 1997.
-Please send any positive feedback to <a
-href="mailto:hirsch@fjhirsch.com">Frederick Hirsch</a> (the original
-article author) and all negative feedback to <a
-href="mailto:rse@engelschall.com">Ralf S. Engelschall</a> (the
-<module>mod_ssl</module> author).</p>
 </summary>
 
 <section id="cryptographictech">

diff --git a/docs/manual/ssl/ssl_intro.xml.fr b/docs/manual/ssl/ssl_intro.xml.fr
index fbb151262db92b3312509d292116bf5a411952cb..850c6be633cd2f7ce1401110829f91229fd5dab0 100644 (file)
--- a/docs/manual/ssl/ssl_intro.xml.fr
+++ b/docs/manual/ssl/ssl_intro.xml.fr
@@ -28,15 +28,6 @@
   <title>Chiffrement SSL/TLS fort :  Introduction</title>
 
 <summary>
-<blockquote>
-<p>Ce qui est agr&eacute;able avec les standards est d'avoir l'embarras du choix. Et
-si certains standards ne vous conviennent pas vraiment, il vous suffit
-d'attendre un an pour voir appara&icirc;tre celui qui r&eacute;pondra &agrave; vos attentes.</p>
-
-<p class="cite">-- <cite>A. Tanenbaum</cite>, "Introduction to
-Computer Networks"</p>
-</blockquote>
-
 <p>Ce chapitre en guise d'introduction est destin&eacute; aux lecteurs pour lesquels
 le Web, HTTP et Apache sont familiers, mais ne sont pas des experts en mati&egrave;re
 de s&eacute;curit&eacute;. Il n'a pas la pr&eacute;tention d'&ecirc;tre un guide d&eacute;taill&eacute; sur le
@@ -46,20 +37,6 @@ brevets ou des restrictions d'importation ou d'exportation. Il se veut plut&ocir
 une base de travail pour les utilisateurs de <module>mod_ssl</module> en
 rassemblant diff&eacute;rents concepts, d&eacute;finitions et exemples comme point de d&eacute;part
 pour une exploration plus d&eacute;taill&eacute;e.</p>
-
-<p>Le contenu s'inspire en grande partie, avec la permission de l'auteur,
-de l'article <a
-href="http://home.comcast.net/~fjhirsch/Papers/wwwj/">Introducing
-SSL and Certificates using SSLeay</a> de <a
-href="http://home.comcast.net/~fjhirsch/">Frederick J. Hirsch</a>, de
-l'Open Group Research Institute, publi&eacute; dans <a
-href="http://www.ora.com/catalog/wjsum97/">Web Security: A Matter of
-Trust</a>, World Wide Web Journal, Volume 2, Issue 3, Summer 1997. Vous
-pouvez envoyer toute remarque positive &agrave; <a
-href="mailto:hirsch@fjhirsch.com">Frederick Hirsch</a> (l'auteur de l'article
-original) et toute remarque n&eacute;gative &agrave; <a
-href="mailto:rse@engelschall.com">Ralf S. Engelschall</a> (l'auteur du module
-<module>mod_ssl</module>).</p>
 </summary>
 
 <section id="cryptographictech">