Wording improvement.

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                 Frequently Asked Questions (FAQ) for PostgreSQL
                                        
-   Last updated: Sun Jul 11 21:10:08 EDT 2004
+   Last updated: Sun Jul 11 21:36:51 EDT 2004
    
    Current maintainer: Bruce Momjian (pgman@candle.pha.pa.us)
    
@@ -641,10 +641,10 @@
    all PC hardware is of equal quality. It is not. ECC RAM, SCSI, and
    quality motherboards are more reliable and have better performance
    than less expensive hardware. PostgreSQL will run on almost any
-   hardware but, if you are building a server where reliability and
-   performance are concerns, it is wise to research your hardware options
-   thoroughly. Our email lists can be used to discuss hardware options
-   and tradeoffs.
+   hardware, but if you are building a server where you are concerned
+   about reliability and performance it is wise to research your hardware
+   options thoroughly. Our email lists can be used to discuss hardware
+   options and tradeoffs.
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                            Operational Questions

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     <H1>Frequently Asked Questions (FAQ) for PostgreSQL</H1>
 
-    <P>Last updated: Sun Jul 11 21:10:08 EDT 2004</P>
+    <P>Last updated: Sun Jul 11 21:36:51 EDT 2004</P>
 
     <P>Current maintainer: Bruce Momjian (<A href=
     "mailto:pgman@candle.pha.pa.us">pgman@candle.pha.pa.us</A>)<BR>
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     <P>Because PC hardware is mostly compatible, people tend to believe that
     all PC hardware is of equal quality.  It is not.  ECC RAM, SCSI, and
     quality motherboards are more reliable and have better performance than
-    less expensive hardware.  PostgreSQL will run on almost any hardware
-    but, if you are building a server where reliability and performance are
-    concerns, it is wise to research your hardware options thoroughly.  Our
+    less expensive hardware.  PostgreSQL will run on almost any hardware,
+    but if you are building a server where you are concerned about reliability
+    and performance it is wise to research your hardware options thoroughly.  Our
     email lists can be used to discuss hardware options and tradeoffs.</P>
 
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