doc: more PG 12 wording adjustments

Reported-by: Justin Pryzby
Discussion: https://postgr.es/m/20190510001959.GK3925@telsasoft.com

diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/release-12.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/release-12.sgml
index 977dc53f3e4189d58652c3627d14b4ee492afc2a..54f66e13dca79ed3560fa164a3cc31c016846239 100644 (file)
--- a/doc/src/sgml/release-12.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/release-12.sgml
@@ -722,11 +722,11 @@ Author: Peter Eisentraut <peter_e@gmx.net>
 -->
 
 <para>
-Allow contol over when generic plans are used for prepared statements (Pavel Stehule)
+Allow control over when generic plans are used for prepared statements (Pavel Stehule)
 </para>
 
 <para>
-The server variable plan_cache_mode enables this control.
+This is controlled by the plan_cache_mode server variable.
 </para>
 </listitem>
 
@@ -2476,7 +2476,7 @@ Author: Thomas Munro <tmunro@postgresql.org>
 -->
 
 <para>
-Allow restore of INSERT statements to skip rows which would cause conflicts (Surafel Temesgen)
+Allow restoration of an INSERT-statement dump to skip rows which would cause conflicts (Surafel Temesgen)
 </para>
 
 <para>