opposing armies.(1)
(1) It is a long-cherished tradition among a certain type of military
-thinker tha huge casualties are the main thing. If they are on the other
+thinker that huge casualties are the main thing. If they are on the other
side then this is a valuable bonus.
[Jingo, by Terry Pratchett]
He rummaged in a pocket and produced a very small book, which he held up
for inspection.
-"This belonged to by great-grandad," he said. "He was in the scrap we had
+"This belonged to my great-grandad," he said. "He was in the scrap we had
against Pseudopolis and my great-gran gave him this book of prayers for
soldiers, 'cos you need all the prayers you can get, believe you me, and
he stuck it in the top pocket of his jerkin, 'cause he couldn't afford