This patch makes two minor fixes to the docs: (1) fixes a

spelling mistake in the PREPARE ref page (2) Makes some
English more consistent, in the ref pages for some of the
client apps (3) Adds a link to the libpq docs in the
vacuumdb ref page.

Neil Conway

diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/ref/clusterdb.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/ref/clusterdb.sgml
index eb8142618764a9d40cb4d319f478116abf5c6d73..4e41136168cc66093bff2ecb0b3b2a28895f1209 100644 (file)
--- a/doc/src/sgml/ref/clusterdb.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/ref/clusterdb.sgml
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 <!--
-$Header: /cvsroot/pgsql/doc/src/sgml/ref/clusterdb.sgml,v 1.10 2003/06/18 12:19:11 petere Exp $
+$Header: /cvsroot/pgsql/doc/src/sgml/ref/clusterdb.sgml,v 1.11 2003/08/17 04:46:59 momjian Exp $
 PostgreSQL documentation
 -->
 
@@ -129,10 +129,9 @@ PostgreSQL documentation
       <term><option>--host <replaceable class="parameter">host</replaceable></></term>
       <listitem>
        <para>
-       Specifies the host name of the machine on which the 
-       server
-       is running.  If the value begins with a slash, it is used 
-       as the directory for the Unix domain socket.
+       Specifies the host name of the machine on which the server is
+       running.  If the value begins with a slash, it is used as the
+       directory for the Unix domain socket.
        </para>
       </listitem>
      </varlistentry>
@@ -182,7 +181,7 @@ PostgreSQL documentation
       <term><computeroutput>CLUSTER</computeroutput></term>
       <listitem>
        <para>
-        Everything went well.
+        The database was successfully clustered.
        </para>
       </listitem>
      </varlistentry>

diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/ref/createuser.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/ref/createuser.sgml
index ba882776878393151f35027d02818636bd1b2760..6f58117be1cf1c7bf389fb7644391c92f800d8ae 100644 (file)
--- a/doc/src/sgml/ref/createuser.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/ref/createuser.sgml
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 <!--
-$Header: /cvsroot/pgsql/doc/src/sgml/ref/createuser.sgml,v 1.34 2003/06/06 15:31:46 momjian Exp $
+$Header: /cvsroot/pgsql/doc/src/sgml/ref/createuser.sgml,v 1.35 2003/08/17 04:46:59 momjian Exp $
 PostgreSQL documentation
 -->
 
@@ -276,7 +276,7 @@ PostgreSQL documentation
       <term><computeroutput>CREATE USER</computeroutput></term>
       <listitem>
        <para>
-        All is well.
+        The user was successfully created.
        </para>
       </listitem>
      </varlistentry>

diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/ref/dropuser.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/ref/dropuser.sgml
index 24e8d8ecf45367cb540ed8eafddfdd58c4ba8bf6..c199624d34641a0c31d3258debcff06eaff44eef 100644 (file)
--- a/doc/src/sgml/ref/dropuser.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/ref/dropuser.sgml
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 <!--
-$Header: /cvsroot/pgsql/doc/src/sgml/ref/dropuser.sgml,v 1.26 2003/06/18 12:19:11 petere Exp $
+$Header: /cvsroot/pgsql/doc/src/sgml/ref/dropuser.sgml,v 1.27 2003/08/17 04:46:59 momjian Exp $
 PostgreSQL documentation
 -->
 
@@ -180,7 +180,7 @@ PostgreSQL documentation
       <term><computeroutput>DROP USER</computeroutput></term>
       <listitem>
        <para>
-        All is well.
+        The user was successfully removed.
        </para>
       </listitem>
      </varlistentry>

diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/ref/prepare.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/ref/prepare.sgml
index 9f58b7a5ce8722a4a93d85720d6a0ed396582f49..590772ee2a107b65867c452fe2f3d8040a8ee791 100644 (file)
--- a/doc/src/sgml/ref/prepare.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/ref/prepare.sgml
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 <!--
-$Header: /cvsroot/pgsql/doc/src/sgml/ref/prepare.sgml,v 1.4 2003/04/26 23:56:51 petere Exp $
+$Header: /cvsroot/pgsql/doc/src/sgml/ref/prepare.sgml,v 1.5 2003/08/17 04:46:59 momjian Exp $
 PostgreSQL documentation
 -->
 
@@ -130,7 +130,7 @@ PREPARE <replaceable class="PARAMETER">plan_name</replaceable> [ (<replaceable c
    In some situations, the query plan produced by for a prepared
    statement may be inferior to the plan produced if the statement
    were submitted and executed normally. This is because when the
-   statement is planned and the planer attempts to determine the
+   statement is planned and the planner attempts to determine the
    optimal query plan, the actual values of any parameters specified
    in the statement are
    unavailable. <productname>PostgreSQL</productname> collects

diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/ref/vacuumdb.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/ref/vacuumdb.sgml
index e04cf16c3fe17ce3960c842280429f42c6f3fec8..490d72b5a2f6c365675d014595ead9ed5093dd1f 100644 (file)
--- a/doc/src/sgml/ref/vacuumdb.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/ref/vacuumdb.sgml
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 <!--
-$Header: /cvsroot/pgsql/doc/src/sgml/ref/vacuumdb.sgml,v 1.29 2003/06/18 12:19:11 petere Exp $
+$Header: /cvsroot/pgsql/doc/src/sgml/ref/vacuumdb.sgml,v 1.30 2003/08/17 04:46:59 momjian Exp $
 PostgreSQL documentation
 -->
 
@@ -59,10 +59,11 @@ PostgreSQL documentation
 
 
   <para>
-  <application>vacuumdb</application> might need to connect several
-  times to the <productname>PostgreSQL</productname> server, asking for
-  a password each time. It is convenient to have a
-  <filename>$HOME/.pgpass</> file in such cases.
+   <application>vacuumdb</application> might need to connect several
+   times to the <productname>PostgreSQL</productname> server, asking
+   for a password each time. It is convenient to have a
+   <filename>$HOME/.pgpass</> file in such cases. See <xref
+   linkend="libpq-pgpass"> for more information.
   </para>
 
  </refsect1>
@@ -234,7 +235,7 @@ PostgreSQL documentation
       <term><computeroutput>VACUUM</computeroutput></term>
       <listitem>
        <para>
-        Everything went well.
+        The database was successfully vacuumed.
        </para>
       </listitem>
      </varlistentry>