Reword paragraph

diff --git a/Doc/library/os.rst b/Doc/library/os.rst
index 3e13edd4bba9d3f50dfcd18f6af43f5f050eb82a..ae0b8f8e538a98161d321068c500c83a78b9b1bd 100644 (file)
--- a/Doc/library/os.rst
+++ b/Doc/library/os.rst
@@ -1923,8 +1923,9 @@ written in Python, such as a mail server's external command delivery program.
 
    The :mod:`subprocess` module provides more powerful facilities for spawning new
    processes and retrieving their results; using that module is preferable to using
-   this function.  Use the :mod:`subprocess` module.  Check especially the
-   :ref:`subprocess-replacements` section.
+   this function.  See the
+   :ref:`subprocess-replacements` section in the :mod:`subprocess` documentation
+   for some helpful recipes.
 
    Availability: Unix, Windows.