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Purpose of commit: grammar fixes

Commit summary:
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"successful" -> "successfully"; "them self" -> "themself" - the use of
"themself" as a gender-indeterminate reflexive pronoun in English is
disputed and somewhat awkward, but "them self" is 100% wrong.

diff --git a/ChangeLog b/ChangeLog
index c8747dcc5061fe932fe449617c41e565c3b89937..466a1ddb52830080768ad78679318212b10e12b6 100644 (file)
--- a/ChangeLog
+++ b/ChangeLog
@@ -1,3 +1,9 @@
+2009-08-24  Steve Langasek  <vorlon@debian.org>
+
+       * doc/pam_get_authtok.3.xml: grammar fix.
+       * doc/adg/Linux-PAM-ADG.xml: Likewise.
+       * doc/mwg/Linux-PAM_MWG.xml: Likewise.
+
 2009-07-21  Thorsten Kukuk  <kukuk@thkukuk.de>
 
        * modules/pam_cracklib/pam_cracklib.c (pam_sm_chauthtok): Delete

diff --git a/doc/adg/Linux-PAM_ADG.xml b/doc/adg/Linux-PAM_ADG.xml
index 5f4aa0ab56ee7e16f4a6e3244bfc8c83e4bda873..a39528a9d6756e162f8f2fcc904334b2204a7bf3 100644 (file)
--- a/doc/adg/Linux-PAM_ADG.xml
+++ b/doc/adg/Linux-PAM_ADG.xml
@@ -559,7 +559,7 @@ cc -o application .... -lpam -lpam_misc
             him/herself in a variety of ways. Updating the user's
             authentication token thus corresponds to
             <emphasis>refreshing</emphasis> the object they use to
-            authenticate them self with the system. The word password is
+            authenticate themself with the system. The word password is
             avoided to keep open the possibility that the authentication
             involves a retinal scan or other non-textual mode of
             challenge/response.

diff --git a/doc/man/pam_get_authtok.3.xml b/doc/man/pam_get_authtok.3.xml
index 4edf69e7a28452561ef27cddce95141f151a2f8a..0e81635030109a9a75beae17be4b298622395f75 100644 (file)
--- a/doc/man/pam_get_authtok.3.xml
+++ b/doc/man/pam_get_authtok.3.xml
@@ -162,7 +162,7 @@
         <term>PAM_SUCCESS</term>
         <listitem>
            <para>
-             Authentication token was successful retrieved.
+             Authentication token was successfully retrieved.
           </para>
         </listitem>
       </varlistentry>

diff --git a/doc/mwg/Linux-PAM_MWG.xml b/doc/mwg/Linux-PAM_MWG.xml
index a381dc6cc32bc4456a1a22302abfa9ccc06d717b..25abe6f60bd21573e72ba5b106595a19d081c113 100644 (file)
--- a/doc/mwg/Linux-PAM_MWG.xml
+++ b/doc/mwg/Linux-PAM_MWG.xml
@@ -169,7 +169,7 @@ gcc -shared -o pam_module.so pam_module.o -lpam
           token of some lesser user. In other cases it may not be
           appropriate: when <command>joe</command> maliciously wants
           to reset <command>alice</command>'s password; or when anyone
-          other than the user them self wishes to reset their
+          other than the user themself wishes to reset their
           <emphasis>KERBEROS</emphasis> authentication token. A policy
           for this action should be defined by any reasonable
           authentication scheme, the module writer should consider